Wednesday, January 18, 2012

A Volunteer Military

A volunteer military is a dream of many people. In fact, one of a news reporter tv program, Putra Nababan said that a volunteer military can make the people  will be a hero if they want although they aren’t a police and soldier. He reported that the purpose of volunteer military make someone has sense to help each other especially in social environment. I think every people can be a volunteer military when there’s a place gets a disaster, such as flood, landscape, earthquake, etc. They can help the victim by given  their power in that place, make a community that will let another people to create a community fundraiser and give it to that place. And then a volunteer military is very important for a country at war, because every people can show fight to defend their country without pressure from others. Finally, every people can be a volunteer military, it depends on how they’ll do it and prove it by themselves.

Desti Kurniati , 3 BA , visit my blog : http://destikacang.blogspot.com/
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  1. unpredictable storiesJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:17 PM

    They can help the victim by given their power in that place,.... ---> i think it should be "They can help the victim by GIVING their power......"
    but,overall, you make an interesting paragraph.. i love when you said everybody can be a hero.. :)
    good luck..

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    1. Desti KurniatiJanuary 25, 2012 at 12:40 AM

      thank you agatha :), I'll accept your comment , a good idea :)

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  2. muammar erzahJanuary 25, 2012 at 6:36 AM

    I have suggestion for your writing.
    you wrote " I think every people can be a volunteer military when there’s a place gets a disaster, such as flood, landscape, earthquake, etc. "
    but i think you should write "I think everyone can be a volunteer military when there is a place getting disasters, like floods, earthquakes, landscape, etc."

    thank you.. sorry if my suggestion is wrong..

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  3. Muhammad RiyansyahJanuary 26, 2012 at 8:46 AM

    you write "Putra Nababan said that a volunteer military can make the people will be a hero if they want although they aren’t a police and soldier"

    I suggest u to write "Putra Nababan said a volunteer military can make people become a hero, although they aren’t a police and soldier"
    its more efficient and touch the point.

    MUHAMMAD RIYANSYAH (3BIA)

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