Thursday, January 26, 2012

ARGUING Should the college placement office be responsible for getting graduates jobs?

The college placement office gives much contibutions to the students  for getting a jobs. As the creative students, you should choose the college which provides this place because there are many advantages for students who want to get a job immediately. By the college placement office, it will help you to get a job easier and faster than getting a job by yourself. It also provides many links and informations about companies. For example, there is a coorperation between Pertamina and State Politechnic of Sriwijaya. The company gives the scolarship to some students who have good predicate. Then, it offers them to work at this company after graduate from college. So, it will give much contributions for your life in the future. But, eventhough this way has many advantages, you should not too expect just for this way because sometimes the job which you get is not suitable with your passion. There are may other ways for getting a job, even your own ways can be much better than this one. Your future is depend on yourself. So, don’t waste your opportunity.

NURYULIA, 3BA

3 comments:

  1. By the college placement office, it will help you to get a job easier and faster.....

    better for you to write "college placement office will help you to get a job easier and faster....."

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  2. Sorry,, you wrote "Then, it offers them to work at this company after graduate from college." But I think "this" n "graduate" in your sentence is not suitable.

    I think you should write "Then, it offers them to work at the company after graduating from college."

    It only a small mistake, but your writing is good,
    I'm sorry, if my opinion/suggestion is wrong.. thank you..

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  3. I think better if you write like this "The college placement office gives much contributions for students for getting a jobs.

    CONTRIBUTIONS NOT CONTIBUTION , FOR NOT TO :)

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