Name : Mei Sandy Pratama
Class : 3 BIA
NIM : 0610 3090 1323
My Favorite Music Instrument
My music consists of three types of instrument : guitar that I play by myself, drum that I play with my band, nad piano that I love to hear in concert. My favorite music instrument is drum. I play it on my college’s band in studio, but it is not our studio. We rent it, when we have time to play band. We always participate on band competition inside or outside of campus. We can get popularity from that, moreover we have pretty vocalist with her nice voice, but my band never be a champion. Because, we think music is just for fun. Winning a competition is not too important. Important things are playing music, and increase music skill. Sometimes, when I’m alone, I took my guitar, and I watched piano concert on TV. I think I can’t feel happy without music in my life.
VIEW MY BLOG : www.meisandypratama.blogspot.com
VIEW MY BLOG : www.meisandypratama.blogspot.com
We rent it, when we have time to play band
ReplyDeleteif you wanna put " WHEN " in the middle of sentence, you don't have to use Comma (,)..
The important things .
ReplyDeleteI think your sentence (Important things are playing music, and increase music skill) is not parallelism, you should write : Important things are "PLAYING" music and "INCREASING" music skill.
ReplyDelete@Randy : yes,thank you for your comment, maybe I use American Style,so I use "when"
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