I think the college placement office doesn’t have full responsible to find out a job for student. For example privat Campus. Campus is a place for study and get education , so if the collegion study hard and focus to learn the material , of course after graduates collegion will get the good GPA, and they can choose what jobs they want to have. Beside that everyone has different skill and ability. So if the campus offering the jobs for the collegion sometimes isn’t suitable with their skill and ability. So I think It’s better for the collegion to look for jobs by themselves.
Rahmita , 3 BA
rahmita, your sentence "For example privat Campus
ReplyDeletei think if you use 'FOR EXAMPLE', you should make a complete sentence.
or you can use 'SUCH AS' in your sentence.
dear rahmita, you have wrong word "collegion" it must be "collegian". Thanks:)
ReplyDeleteI think you should look at your sentence : "I think the college placement office doesn’t have full responsible to find out a job for student"
ReplyDeleteit should be : "I think the college placement office doesn’t have full responsibilities to find out a job for student"
you should change "RESPONSIBLE" becomes "RESPONSIBILITY", thx
the sentence : So if the campus offering the jobs for the collegion sometimes isn’t suitable with their skill and ability.
ReplyDeleteIt should be : 'so if the campus offers'
Thanks
I think,you should have more explanation in your sentences.
ReplyDeleteThanks