ANNISA 3 BA
what makes a tie ugly
There are three reasons that can make a tie looks ugly : a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design and a tie with the wrong combination color. First, a tie made from weird material like wool makes it looks as if it has been hand-crocheted. The knot is so thick it looks like some malignant tumor growing on the guy’s neck. A tie should be made of smooth material like cotton. Second, the bad design such as, the design of Mona Lisa on it or a huge broccoli, cabbage, and bananas make a tie looks ugly. Last, the wrong combination color also makes a tie looks like ugly. Combining orange bubbles with hot pink squares or dark brown stripes with neon blue rectangles and orange parrots and lavender fish make a tie look elegant silk with simple stripes or squares in subdued but rich colors. That’s all the bad things that make a tie can be ugly.
annisa,, maybe you can put this sentence "such as : wool. A tie which is made of wool looks as it has been hand-crocheted." so it become "a tie made from weird material. Such as : wool. A tie which is made of wool looks as it has been hand-crocheted ." in your paragraph.
ReplyDeletejust suggestion :)
I think you should make a conclusion in the end paragraph,so that the paragraph will be clear.
ReplyDeleteI think you should give more explanation with your sentence, "A tie should be made of smooth material like cotton.", thx
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