Sunday, January 8, 2012

classifying

ANNISA 3 BA

what makes a tie ugly

There are three reasons that can make a tie looks ugly : a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design and a tie with the wrong combination color. First, a tie made from weird material like wool makes it looks as if it has been hand-crocheted. The knot is so thick it looks like some malignant tumor growing on the guy’s neck. A tie should be made of smooth material like cotton. Second, the bad design such as, the design of Mona Lisa on it or a huge broccoli, cabbage, and bananas make a tie looks ugly. Last, the wrong combination color also makes a tie looks like ugly. Combining orange bubbles with hot pink squares or dark brown stripes with neon blue rectangles and orange parrots and lavender fish make a tie look elegant silk with simple stripes or squares in subdued but rich colors. That’s all the bad things that make a tie can be ugly.

3 comments:

  1. annisa,, maybe you can put this sentence "such as : wool. A tie which is made of wool looks as it has been hand-crocheted." so it become "a tie made from weird material. Such as : wool. A tie which is made of wool looks as it has been hand-crocheted ." in your paragraph.
    just suggestion :)

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  2. I think you should make a conclusion in the end paragraph,so that the paragraph will be clear.

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  3. I think you should give more explanation with your sentence, "A tie should be made of smooth material like cotton.", thx

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