Monday, January 2, 2012

Classifying

Name   : Alfizera Ramdhani
Class    : 3 BIA
NIM    : 0610 3090 1312


My Favorite Dessert


            I have three kinds of favorite desserts : Chocolate Ice Cream, Vanilla Ice Cream, and Fruit Ice Cream. The first is Chocolate Ice Cream. I really like Chocolate especially for Ice Cream. When I eat chocolate ice cream, it really delicious when it melds in my mouth. The second is vanilla ice cream. It was same like the chocolate ice cream but with vanilla, it have very sweet taste. And the third Is fruit ice cream. I like it because the ice cream have many taste that you can choose from fruit, like banana ice cream and strawberry ice cream.
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3 comments:

  1. Rexy TheradiatorspringJanuary 4, 2012 at 4:59 PM

    I think you should write "I really like Chocolate Ice Cream, because the taste of chocolate ice cream is really delicious. When I eat Chocolate Ice Cream, it melds in my mouth."

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  2. Fety.Andriyani.SiregarJanuary 4, 2012 at 5:19 PM

    you just tell any kinds of your favorite desserts, but you don't explan anything the taste of chocolate ice cream,vanilla ice cream and fruit ice cream...

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  3. SoyarepaJanuary 4, 2012 at 5:20 PM

    you must add your concluding sentence.

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