Volleyball and volleybeach are similar in size of yard and sport equipments, but they differ in number of players and places. Volleyball is a team sport in which two teams of six players are separated by net. Each team tries to score points by grounding the ball on the other team court under the organized rules. Volleybeach is a team sport in which two teams of two players are separated by net. Players use their arms or hands to play it. The size of volleyball and volleybeach fields are actually the same. It’s 9 x 18 meters rectangular and 3 meters for attack line defenders. Besides the size of fields, the size of their balls are also similar. It’s 65 – 75 centimeters width and 260 – 280 grams weight. Actually, the size of their nets are also same. It’s 2,44 meters for men and 2,24 meters for women. Besides those similarities, there are some differences between volleyball and volleybeach. The differences are number of players and places. The number of volleyball players are six players and only two players for volleybeach. Besides number of players, volleyball and volleybeach are also different in places. Volleyball players play volley in the court or field. It’s not same with volleybeach players who play volley in the beach. In conclusions, volleyball and volley beach are different in number of players and places.
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ReplyDeletein conclusion,, you can add what would you choose? " volley ball or volley beach " ??
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I think your compare isn't balance, because you mainly discuss about your similarities than your contrast.
ReplyDeletedear nini, you have incompleteness paragraph, you should have more explanation in your contrasting paragraph. You are covering one side of the comparison/contrast but failing to cover the other.Thanks:)
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DeleteI think you should use transition signal to connect each sentence and make it more interesting.
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