I have three kinds of thing which can make a tie ugly: Material, Design, and Color. The first thing,Material. One way ties are ugly when they're made of weird material. Ties should be made of smooth material, like cotton. But, not polyester or acrylic because they look cheap. The second thing is Design. It can influence many people to choose the the tie which they want. Some of ties have many design, such as a world famous artist, fruits, vegetables, and the anatomy of woman. But, ties can be ugly even if they're made of natural material and they don't have any design at all on them. The last type which can make a tie ugly is color, the ties which are combined with the worst design and striking colors can make it like an ancient tie.
Desti Kurniati, 3 BA, http://destikacang.blogspot.com/
sentence "The first thing,Material" where is the verb?
ReplyDeletesentence "The first thing,Material" where is the verb?
ReplyDeleteyou must put the verb "is" in the sentence "The first thing,Material." become " The first thing is Material." So, it can be make it clear. Just suggestion :)
ReplyDeleteI think you should change your sentence "I have three kinds of thing which can make a tie ugly" become "there are three things which can make a tie ugly", :D
ReplyDeleteDesti, where is your concluding sentence??
ReplyDeleteSo whether a tie have many design it depends of the people to choose a tie that they want to wear . is it suitable ? :P
Deletesoya, I think it is CONCLUSION, not CONCLUDING :)
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