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Saturday, January 7, 2012
The Ugly Ties
There are three kinds of thing that make a tie ugly. First, it is made of weird material. For example, a tie made of wool, polyester, or acrylic. It looks like some malignant tumor growing on the guy’s neck. Ties should be made of smooth material or natural fabrics, like cotton. Because it can make ties look elegant. Then, the design of ties. Ties can be ugly even if they are made of natural material and they do not have any design at all. But, many designs on it is not good, too. Like a tie that had huge broccoli, cabbage heads, and bananas printed all over it. It is so ugly. Beside that, ties have bad combination of colors. For example, combining orange bubbles with hot pink squares or dark brown stripes with neon blue rectangles. It is not match. A good tie usually have good combination of colors, too. Indeed, materials, design, and colors are important things to consider in choosing a tie.
Soya Repa, 3 BA, visit my blog: http://soyarepa.blogspot.com/
Soya Repa, 3 BA, visit my blog: http://soyarepa.blogspot.com/
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sentence " For example, combining orange bubbles with hot pink squares or dark brown stripes with neon blue rectangles"
ReplyDeleteas I know..
if we're using "for example", we should make a complete sentence.
"For example, combining orange bubbles with hot pink squares or dark brown stripes with neon blue rectangles"
ReplyDeletewhy you don't change for example become such as to your sentence.
It is a good paragraph, Soya.
ReplyDeletebut let me make it clear, as far as I know..
'FOR EXAMPLE' must be followed with a sentence and it also can begin a new sentence,
and 'SUCH AS' must be followed with a word and it can be placed in the middle of the sentence without using comma.
here is the examples:
'FOR EXAMPLE'
My father loves going to restaurants which serve unusual foods. For example, last week he went to a restaurant which serves fried-snake.
'SUCH AS'
Food such as pizza and hamburgers are not really junk food.
Keep On Practicing, Soya :)
thank you for your comment :D
ReplyDeleteI think you should look at your sentence "There are three kinds of thing that make a tie ugly", may be you can change it to "There are three things that make a tie ugly", thx
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