Ugly Tie
There are several reasons why a neck tie looks ugly. first, it made of weird material. have you ever seen a tie made of wool ? it looks as if it's beer hand-crocheted. I mean, the knot is so thick it looks like some malignant tumor growing on the guy's neck.Second, the design on ties ? i saw a tie with a picture of the Monalisa on it. To me that's dissing a world famous to barf! let's not even mention ties that are sexually stupid. I mean, showing parts of women's anatomy or Santa Claus and Mrs. Claus-well, i won't say more. Third, but ties can be ugly even if they're made of natural material and they don't have any design at all on them. I'm talking about color. My grandmother once gave me a tie that was puke green.
M. Reza Hidayatullah 3BA
your ending isn't connect with your last topic, I suggest you to explain your topic more and then make your support sentence too.
ReplyDeletesorry reza..
Deletebut I think you have so many lack of explanation in your paragraph.
I think you should make it a good ending in your paragraph .
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ReplyDeleteExcuse me, Reza.. I think if you use first, second, and third.. Finally (a conclusion).. :)
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