There are several reasons why a country should have volunteers millitary. First, volunteers military are needed to help a country which is attacked by another country. Volunteers military will help people whose country is attacked by another country. Second, volunteers military are needed to help soldiers which are in a war. Volunteers military will help soldiers to handle another soldiers which are hurted in a war. Besides that, they will help soldiers to bring medicines for another soldiers. Third, volunteers military are needed to protect a country from enemies. Volunteers military will help soldiers to protect a country from enemies. Besides that, they will help soldiers to destroy enemies from their country. In conclusions, a country should have volunteers military, because volunteers military are needed to help a country which is attacked by another country, volunteers military are needed to help soldiers which are in a war, and volunteers military are needed to protect a country from enemies.
Nini Andika Puri , 3 BA , visit my blog :http://niniandikapuri.blogspot.com/
Nini, better if your sentence "Second, volunteers military are needed to help soldiers which are in a war" become ""Second, volunteers military are needed to help soldiers in a war"
ReplyDeletethanks desti... :)
Deleteok nini , you are a good writer :*
Deletefirst, u write a linking santance "Besides That" too much. u can change those word by write "and than" "and also" or other linking santance.
ReplyDeletesecond, u should emphasize " volunteers military are needed to help the army in emergency condition. because volunteers military aren't needed if the power of army is exist.
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MUHAMMAD RIYANSYAH 3BIA