Sunday, January 8, 2012


Name : Citra Ayudhya
Class : 3BIA

Types of music

I have three types of musics: musics easy listening, musics give a cheerful atmosphere or give a spirit, musics that adds value to God. My favorite music is Pop. I like pop because I mostly listen Pop musics. I feel cheerful atmosphere and a spirit. When I want to listen to relaxing music such as jazz. Listening to jazz music that easy listen. Example of jazz music that I like is Everybody Knew sung by Citra. Religious music create a balance in life because this music adds Value to God. 
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6 comments:

  1. NINI. APJanuary 11, 2012 at 4:32 PM

    dear citra@ I think your paragraf is not complate because you don't explain these words detaily "musics easy listening, musics give a cheerful atmosphere or give a spirit, musics that adds value to God".

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  2. Fety.Andriyani.SiregarJanuary 11, 2012 at 5:35 PM

    dear ..
    your paragraph is incoherent with your topic sentence .
    you explain your favorite music not three types of musics.

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  3. dewinursariJanuary 11, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    dear citra..
    I "fell" cheerful atmosphere and a spirit. become "feel"

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  4. Rexy TheradiatorspringJanuary 11, 2012 at 8:28 PM

    I think your sentence "When I want to listen to relaxing music such as jazz. Listening to jazz music that easy listen" is "Vague", thx

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  5. UnknownJanuary 17, 2012 at 2:41 AM

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  6. UnknownJanuary 17, 2012 at 2:43 AM

    thanks for comments :)

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