Actually, football and soccer are both played in team, but they differ in position of players and the duration of time. There are some positions in football, those are : Offensive Line (OL) , Quarter Back (QB), Running Back (RB), Wide Receiver (WR), and Tight End (TE). Offensive Line (OL) is a person who has a function to protect the ball thrower. Quarter Back (QB) is a person who has a function to give the ball to Running Back (RB). Running Back (RB) is a person who has a function to receive the ball from Quarter Back (QB). Wide Receiver (WR) is a person who has a function to catch the ball which is thrown by Quarter Back (QB). Tight End (TE) is a person who has a function to protect Quarter Back (QB) and his partners. Those positions are different with soccer. Positions which are in soccer, are : Goalkeeper, Defensive Midfielder, Striker, etc. Goalkeeper is a person who protects the ball from the other team. Defensive Midfielder is a person who defends his area from the other team. Striker is a person who attacks and makes a goal. Besides the positions of players, football and soccer are also different in the duration of time. It’s 2 × 45 minutes for soccer, and 4 × 15 minutes for football. In conclusions, football and soccer are both played in team, but they differ in position of players and the duration of time.
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I think you can add one topic between players and time duration, because when you compare between players and time duration, your topic about time duration is too short .
ReplyDeletethanks :)
Deleteif you want to make your paragraph like this pattern, I think it's better for you to make it into two paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI think it will be funny if I make it into two paragraph, because you know that my paragraph is not a long paragraph, so what do you think about that?
Deletei think, your paragraph is incompleteness between position of players and the duration of time .
ReplyDeletewhat do you mean by saying "incompleteness" ?
Deletedear Rexy:
ReplyDeleteyou are a good writer,,,(: