NAME: ENDAH WIDYANINGRUM
NIM : 0610 3090 1320
CLASS: 3 BIA
Humanely, spender and saver are attitudes that all people have. These attitudes usually will appear when everyone start to take a decision about their money. Both of them differ in life style, advantages and disadvantage. For people who have a spender attitude toward money usually always spend all their money after they got money, and never think to save some money for anything that would probably happen. In their mind, they just want to buy anything that they want. The advantages that they will get from this attitude are getting happiness and satisfied. But, it would be disadvantage for them when they don't have money. They will be stuck and couldn't do anything.
And for people who have a saver attitude toward money usually always collect a half or less than a half from the money that they got. They just use their money according to their needs. The advantages from people who has saver attitude, they will have enough even much money that they can use someday if they really need it. But they have disadvantages because of saver. They must really control and handle theirselve to keep their money save.
Sorry Endah..
ReplyDeleteI just want to help your assignment..
I think your paragraph has a lack of explanation about the similarity of two attitudes toward our money. And the last sentence, you should choose the best choice between two attitudes toward our money. Thank you.
for suggestion endah, you can make your paragraph more interesting by using transition signals to connect each sentence.
Deletethank you :)
I think you should look at your sentence : "For people who have a spender attitude toward money usually always spend all their money"
ReplyDeleteyou can't write "usually always", you should choose "usually" or "always", for example : For people who have a spender attitude toward money usually spend all their money, thx