NAME: JULYANA RYALESTARY
NIM : 061030901322
CLASS: 3 BIA
YOUR ATTITUDE TOWARD MONEY
Spender and saver are attitudes that all people have. Actually, both of them are the ways that everyone could choose which one they prefer. Both of them are differ in reason, behavior, and result. Why a lot of people have spender attitude toward money? Because they can not control theirselve. They want to get anythings that they want in their minds. Besides that, the behavior of people who have spender toward are not good. Usually, they shop immediately after they earn money and everything that they buy are not necessary for them, they do not really to have the things they buy, it is just for a happiness and to show the other that they look good with everything they wear and use from the money they earned. They just waste their money. In other hand many people are spender with money because they don't know how to manage their money. As the result, they can be stuck when they need money but they don't save some money and they would borrow money to the others like relatives, friends, etc
In contrast, why many people realize to be saver attitude toward money? Because, they know that if someday there's something trouble happen they need money or in other situation many people will use their money for their next planning which really important for their future , so they can prepare everything especially money. Usually, the behavior of people who have saver attitude toward money always set apart and collect every time they earned money and use the money as necessary. As the result, they have much money and it probably make them sure that they will ready if something trouble will happen and for the positive impact, they can make their planning success. Although spender and saver are different, we as a human being must balance where we must in the middle of both. Don't too be spender but don't too be saver. ^_^
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ReplyDeletei think your topic sentence is enough to support your sentences.. but in the last sentence, you should choose the best choice between spender and saver.. because it was one of our assignment..:)
july, you said "borrow money" in your sentence. But actually, if you want to use "money" it is better to use 'lend' than 'borrow'
Deleteit is only my suggestion, thank you july :)
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ReplyDeleteJuly, I think you should look at your sentence : "Both of them are differ in reason, behavior, and result."
Deleteit should be : "Both of them are different in reason, behavior, and result."
you should change "DIFFER" becomes "DIFFERENT", thx :)