When to go casual and when to dress up
casual are different from dress up. Casual is non formal situasion and dress up formal situasions such as : when we hang out with family, friend and girl friend and example dress up such as : weeding party and ceremony. casual is simple clothes not complicated and dress up is complicated clothes when we going to mall just where t-shirt, slipers and jeans. different with dress up full clothes going to weeding party where is jas, shoes, blazers trousers and dress.
M. Reza Hidayatullah 3BA
you should explain your topic more Reza, because I think your explanation is not complete anymore.
ReplyDeletedear reza:
ReplyDelete....when we hang out with family, friend and girl friend(full stop ) "and" should be deleted. (for) example dress up such as : (weeding) it means "wedding" party and ceremony.
please consider for your next words.
just suggestion eza,
ReplyDeleteyou should make an interesting topic sentence .
for example, casual and dress up are kinds of clothes,but they differences in (bla bla) .casual are .....
I think you should focus on the similarities and differences between two things.
ReplyDeleteThe sentence :when we going to mall just where t-shirt, slipers and jeans
ReplyDeleteshould be : 'when go to mall just wear'
thanks
reza, I think you should make your topic sentence first, about what is the differences between when wear casual and dress up :)
ReplyDeletemaybe you can make three point as your topic sentence, then you explain.