The Importance Of Regular Exercise
Compare And Contrast
Jogging And Swimming
Jogging and
swimming have many similarity as sport which can give healthy to our body and
also give happy to ourselves. But, beside that both of sport it is also have
many differences consist of: first both of them have differences start from
places to do sport it. If we want to swim we should go to swimming pool, river,
etc. whereas if we want jogging we can come to park, field, and on the way,
second swimming can be easily to long of your body whereas jogging can give our
physic power become stronger, and the last swimming give a benefit to us increase
energy in against water whereas jogging give a benefit to be able run with
distance long. I prefer swimming, too jogging because swimming is sport most of
be able to make me to be happy and I can disappear all problem in my self when
I did this sport and swimming need great power to do this eventhought in
deepwater. Swimming more many are liked by many people than jogging because
swimming more happying than jogging.
Name: Rian Tri Wahyudi
Class: 3BIA
i think your sentence
ReplyDelete"whereas if we want jogging we can come to park, field, and on the way, second swimming can be easily to long of your body whereas jogging can give our physic power become stronger, and the last swimming give a benefit to us increase energy in against water whereas jogging give a benefit to be able run with distance long" is too long Ryan.
I believe that you can make it shorter than this.
bro, I think you should look at your sentence : "beside that both of sport it is also have many differences . . . "
ReplyDeleteit should be : "beside that both of sport are also have many differences . . . .so on", thx
I think the sentence 'Jogging and swimming have many similarity'
ReplyDelete"similarity" it should be "similarities", because you put many before it.
Thanks