Fety andriyani siregar 3BA
Three Things Which Can Make A Tie Ugly
I have three kinds of thing which on make a tie ugly : Material, Design, and Color. The First type made of weird material because the knot is so thick. ties should be made of smooth material but not polyester or acrylic because they look cheap. ties made out at natural material like cotton. The Second Type is design, the design of the tie that depends on many people to choose the tie which they like and sometimes design of tie which were world famous artist, vegetables fruits and women's anatomy re the biggest choose by people. but ties can be ugly even if they're made of natural material and they have any design at all om them. And The Third is color combining some of the design ties are worst and the bright color there's nothing like an elegant silk tie with simple stripes or square in subdued bud rich colors.
"The Second Type is design, the design of the tie that depends on many people to choose the tie which they like and sometimes design of tie which were world famous artist, vegetables fruits and women's anatomy re the biggest choose by people."
ReplyDeletefety.. I think this sentence it too long.
for suggestion, you can separate it into two or more.
I think you should change your sentence : "I have three kinds of thing which on make a tie ugly : Material, Design, and Color" becomes : "There are three things which make a tie looks ugly, those are : Material, Design, and Color", thx
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