Rahmita 3BA
what makes a tie ugly
There are three reasons of tie that make it looks ugly they are, a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design, and a tie with wrong combination color. First, a tie which is made of weird material like wool makes a tie looks ugly. The knot is so thick , it looks like some malignant tumour growing on the guy's neck. Second, a tie with a picture of world famous artist and showing parts of women's anatomy or santa claus, it looks so sexually stupid on ties. Third, designer of ties are worst of all, because they combine orange bubbles with hot pink squares or with another rich colors. that's all the bad things that make a tie can ugly
sentence "There are three reasons of tie that make it looks ugly they are, a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design, and a tie with wrong combination color
ReplyDeletefor suggestion, you can add "." to separate your sentence.
like this..
"There are three reasons of tie that make it looks ugly.They are, a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design, and a tie with wrong combination color."
There are three reasons of tie that make it looks ugly they are, a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design, and a tie with wrong combination color.
ReplyDeleteyou need to add punctuation (.)after you explain about the topic sentence.
so, it become "There are three reasons of tie that make it looks ugly. They are, a tie which is made of weird material, a tie which has bad design, and a tie with wrong combination color.
I think you should change your sentence, "There are three reasons of tie that make it looks ugly" become "There are three reasons that make a tie looks ugly", thx
ReplyDelete"a tie with a picture of world famous artist and showing parts of women's anatomy or santa claus"
ReplyDeleteyou should mention for example,it will be clear as example.