Class : 3 BIA
Topic : Should we continue ROTC programs on campus?
ROTC (Reserve Officers Training Corps) is a program for training students in American Universities to serve as officers in the United States armed forces. We should continue ROTC program on campus because this program give benefit for students. For example, ROTC teach you about knowledge in military science and leadership. This program also provide a lot of knowledge about problem solving techniques, strategic planning and how to organize something, professional ethics and responsibility of country. The students can work as officers related in the programs of ROTC. they work as officers to protect and serve their country as same as US army. it makes student know the real live of military. so that, this program should be continued on campus because it contain a lot benefit for student university.
Your writing is almost similar to my writing, you should see my posts before you make your writing. Because the sentences in your writing is very similar to my writing.
ReplyDeletesorry.....
a lots of word in this world. also for the idea. may be this passage have same reference.
Deleteok, no problem and it's ok...
ReplyDeletebut only for suggestion to help you,, you should check other writing in this blog before you send your writing.. to avoid if there are similarities..
thats not one of big problem. everybody has their own way to write the paragraph.
Deleteok no problem if you can't receive my suggestion about you should check other writing in this blog..
ReplyDeleteI will give you suggestion about your sentences..
First, you wrote "ROTC teach you about knowledge in military science and leadership."
I think "teach" is wrong.. You should write "teaches".
So, the correct sentence is "ROTC teaches you about the knowledge in military science and leadership."
Second, you wrote "This programs also provide a lot of knowledge"
You wrote "this programs" in your sentence, as we know "Programs" is plural. You should change it and write "these programs".
So, the correct sentence is "These programs also provide a lot of knowledge".
sorry myfriend..
ok no problem if you can't receive my suggestion about you should check other writing in this blog..
ReplyDeleteI will give you suggestion about your sentences..
First, you wrote "ROTC teach you about knowledge in military science and leadership."
I think "teach" is wrong.. You should write "teaches".
So, the correct sentence is "ROTC teaches you about the knowledge in military science and leadership."
Second, you wrote "This programs also provide a lot of knowledge"
You wrote "this programs" in your sentence, as we know "Programs" is plural. You should change it and write "these programs".
So, the correct sentence is "These programs also provide a lot of knowledge".
sorry myfriend..
ha? may be you should open your grammer book and find the true one.
DeleteYou have to be careful when reading the passage. I write "this program" bro...
thats singular.
be careful :)
ROTC (Reserve Officers Training Corps) is a program for training students in American Universities to serve as officers in the United States armed forces. We should continue ROTC program on campus because this program give benefit for students.
DeleteROTC program is singular so you have to write down :
... because this program gives benefit...
this program also provides . . .
... because it contains . . .
pay attention to capitalization
heii bro... yesterday i saw your writing..
ReplyDeleteand you wrote "This programs also provide a lot of knowledge".
so, you should write "these programs".
but now, i don't know why your writing has changed.. Now in your writing "This program also provide a lot of knowledge". "program" without "s". I don't know why your writing has changed..
ok, if I wrong, I say sorry..
but, come on You should be wise to accept the suggestion of your friends..
and I have new suggestion for your sentence.
You wrote "so that, this program should be continued on campus because it contain a lot benefit for student university."
come on, many mistakes in your sentence..
first: "so that", I think You should make it with a capital letter.
second: "it contain" I think you should open your grammar book. it's wrong.. you should write " it contains" with "s" bro.
third: "a lot benefit for student university" come on better if you write " a lot of benefits for students university".
I hope you can receive my suggestion and try to be wise..
thank you..