Class : 3 BIA
Topic : Should we continue ROTC programs on campus?
We should continue ROTC programs on campus
ROTC or Reserve Officers Training Corps is the program for training students in American Universities to serve as officers in the United States armed forces. In this case, we should continue ROTC programs on campus. Because I think the programs of ROTC will give many benefits or advantages toward students on campus. For example, the programs of ROTC will provide knowledge about military science and leadership. And also, the programs will provide a lot of knowledge about problem solving techniques, strategic planning and organization, professional ethics and responsibility of students toward their country. And then, the students can work as officers related with the programs of ROTC, for example students in Columbia University. The students of Columbia University can work as officers to protect and serve their country because of the programs from ROTC. It means, the programs of ROTC are very useful for students on campus.
I think advantages and benefits are the same, so I suggest you to choose one :)
ReplyDeletethank you..
ReplyDeleteI know, because in my sentence I wrote advantages or benefits toward students.. there is OR in my sentence.. it means, advantages and benefits are the same...
so, why did you write both of them ?
Deletenot choose one ? :)
I just for fun.. hhaaaaa
Deleteactually, I choose one, but suddenly I want to make both of them..
you write "Because I think the programs of ROTC will give many benefits or advantages toward students on campus"
ReplyDeletefirst, if u wanna write "I think", after "because" u should give ","
or you write "because the program of ROTC........"
second, ROTC will give????
arrggghhhh, Indonesian Style! come on, you write indonesian passage by using English, hmmm
ROTC give.....
better.
thank you..
ReplyDeletefunny suggestion..hha
funny suggestion because you write a funny sentence. :)
ReplyDeletebut thats real
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